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	<title>Comments on: The Crow Murders &#8212; Revision Blues</title>
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		<title>By: Jonathan Ball</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jonathan Ball</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 06 Nov 2009 13:12:57 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>So far I haven&#039;t written word one in the new revised file. Another thing I do for a major new draft is retype the entire manuscript, even pages I plan to leave unchanged. I find this leads me to make larger revisions rather than just playing with the type already there. Anytime you&#039;re able to give me some feedback is useful, as I say there are more revisions ahead than I initially expected. So yes, I&#039;d love to hear your suggestions, whenever you have time to make them. You should be aware that I am making a few major changes not reflected in that manuscript, such as making Natalie King the &quot;editor&quot; and not Alison Toews.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>So far I haven&#8217;t written word one in the new revised file. Another thing I do for a major new draft is retype the entire manuscript, even pages I plan to leave unchanged. I find this leads me to make larger revisions rather than just playing with the type already there. Anytime you&#8217;re able to give me some feedback is useful, as I say there are more revisions ahead than I initially expected. So yes, I&#8217;d love to hear your suggestions, whenever you have time to make them. You should be aware that I am making a few major changes not reflected in that manuscript, such as making Natalie King the &#8220;editor&#8221; and not Alison Toews.</p>
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		<title>By: saleema</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 06 Nov 2009 06:32:01 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>If I read the Crow Murders this coming week, will it be too late to be of any use in this wave of revisions?  I have really been looking forward to reading it.  It seems like lately the only reading I do is right before I go to sleep...not sure where the time has been going.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>If I read the Crow Murders this coming week, will it be too late to be of any use in this wave of revisions?  I have really been looking forward to reading it.  It seems like lately the only reading I do is right before I go to sleep&#8230;not sure where the time has been going.</p>
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